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Elora

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Character Name: Elora Reblar
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Alias:
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Apparent Age: 26
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Race: Neko
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Height: 6'0
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Weight: 153
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Gender: Female
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Physical Description:

Elora could be considered attractive by most standards, she has a slim, curvy body and a notable bust size. She has grey hair and blue eyes. Whether her cat-like features are a hit or miss for some depends on the person.


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Known Relatives:

Caede Reblar-Mother

Aymar-Reblar-father
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Religion: none
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Skills: Basic skills, survival skills, hunting skills. Mugen style Ninjutsu expert. Tracking skills, stealth skills, acting skills and melee weapons. Good knowledge of the magic/supernatural world. Ki Control.
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Abilities: Elora has a moderate resistance to mental attacks thanks to training. Super human physical Ki stats which she can increase via training and fighting.
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Alignment: Neutral Good
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Personality:

Elora was raised with manners and behaves as such. Generally good natured but very observant and not naive. Just because she's nice doesn't mean she's ignorant of the darker side of the world around her. She encourages those around them when they need it and hates to see people she cares about upset.
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Powers: Meta human enhanced stats
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Restrictions: Her stats are 100x times her weight.
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Special Techniques:

Advanced Ki Sense: Can sense someone of their own internal energy. Her Ki sense is sharper then average,

Trance: By concentrating, she can empower her physical attacks to make them moderately stronger for a short time. When active, her energy becomes visible in an aura.

Surge Rush: Elora covers herself in a ball of energy before being launched forward at high speeds, it acts like a moderate shield and its harder to make sharp turns. She cannot use other techniques while active but its main use is for travel or if she needs to shoulder enemy fire while trying to get somewhere quickly.

Teleport: She can teleport if she knows where she's going or been there before only. The longer the distance, the longer the cool down time before use again. Leaves a few sakura petals on the ground which vanish after a few moments, as they aren't actually the real thing of course but just look like them.

Either Burst: An AOE from her person from a 360 degree angle. The ranger depends how much energy she puts into it but basic is about five feet from her person.

Ki Weapons: Can create visible weapons to use in combat, their strength and durability is based on her current strength and can be stopped like normal weapons. She's also been known to make use of these in the style of claws for her hands.

Arrow: Creates arrows that do piercing damage on contact. They grow weaker the further the distance.

Shield: Creates a shield of her own purple energy, the strength is based on her current level but as of now its pretty sturdy. She cannot attack when its active. Rapid attacks with enough strength to do damage can also tear it down instead of just one big overwhelming attack.

Energy Ball: Its a ball of energy that does moderate damage. It's saving grace is its decently fast and more power could be put into it. She
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Super Techniques:

Dancing Dragon Flame: A Chinese-styled dragon made of purple PK energy crashes into the opponent or area doing devastating damage upon impact. The area effect is about a football field. After use, she'll be completely drained of her PK energy for thirty minutes. This technique was just hers originally but Natomi was taught by them a few of their tricks, though their techniques differ since they use different energies.
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Super Forms:
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Class: Supernal
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Weapons and Precious Items: Basic items
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Phobias: Needle injections in a hospital setting, she's not sure why considering all the beings she fought in the past.
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Illnesses: ---
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Sexual Preferences: Straight
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Occupation: Former Mugen Ninja Master/Friendly rival(with Kobe)
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History: Growing up, she was told stories of her people by her parents before ending up in the Mugen Village. After enough time and the like, they were accepted as one of their own which both were happy with. Elora decided she wanted to be a ninja at a early age, as her race lacked any power on their own she had to learn something. Her art, it was decided, was Ki.

Elora enjoyed her life there, though of course like anything it had its down sides. She was close with Natomi and was a bit troubled at the crime she was supposedly guilty of. She hadn't believed them then and stubbornly stuck to her guns along with Kobe which caused some friction at the time. She did vow to do what she could to clear things up while Natomi was keeping her head low to get her name cleared.

One other blow in her decision to live in the village was a few years ago Akatsuki was killing in alarming numbers half demons for some sort of plan. One of the victims was a family both Elora and Kobe were close to, and to make it worse they weren't told this information until after. The new current leader of the village was more 'by the book' and thought Outsider affairs weren't their concern and that it was the job of Hunters and their ilk to do with it.

Suffice to say, neither were pleased that the head of the village basically sat on their hands while this was going on.

This strained things with Kobe and Elora with upon everything else decided they had enough and retired from the village, feeling both of them could do more to help outside of it then in. Both her and Kobe feel as if the village was losing its way a bit.
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Status: Alive
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Re: Elora

Post by namey on Mon Aug 15, 2016 10:30 pm

Lose the Trance. It doesn't seem to have a place with her power and since she can heft 7 and a half Tons, it's overkill. I also noticed that her moves were very similar to that of a basic Mystic. Just pointing that out.
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Re: Elora

Post by Sion Reaver on Mon Aug 15, 2016 11:14 pm

I can lose it, but just odd since its basically the same thing both Natomi and Kobe can do, they just use different energies to do the same thing.

Her moves are more based on Natomi, just under a different name. They all have the shield, making weapons, and empowering their fist with what ever energy, teleport and she even has Natomi's Either Burst.(Or rather Natomi learned it from her)
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Re: Elora

Post by namey on Tue Aug 16, 2016 6:10 am

Did you want to change her race back to a Malzon, maybe give her cryokinesis. She was a friend of Natomi, maybe they were a fire/ice team.
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Re: Elora

Post by Sion Reaver on Tue Aug 16, 2016 6:46 am

I'll just keep them as is.
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Post by namey on Tue Aug 16, 2016 12:11 pm

I can imagine so. Aa a Malzon, she would lose her insane super stats. Plus side? She could keep her Trance move. As far as it and other moves like it, I'll be coming down hard on them if they don't like like they belong in their powerpool. It won't be retroactive. Also, x100 seems like it should be the max limit for races that don't have the potential for unlimited growth. However, in spite of that, ╛══╧╠╙┬┴!
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Re: Elora

Post by Sion Reaver on Thu Aug 18, 2016 12:21 am

If a cap needs to be stated on races that's fine. But having 100x for Every race doesn't make sense and would give races with a unlimited growth rate(Arkons, Mystics) another needless leg up they don't need. As a neko, pretty much all her power is just from a learned energy type to actually fight, as naturally she's from a weak race. She'd never be able to fight a fully trained Nosferartu of Kobe's level naturally. A Human of course can do the same. Naomi mentioned how some Humans are a lot stronger then most non humans, it would suck if all those are just because of a special blood line or something. Which going that route could lead to, because it would become who won the Genetic Lottery.

I'm even fine if for a time stronger new chars need to be hold for a bit, but there's no need to throw the baby out with the bath water.

It also opens up Pandora's box, because then you have to account for Natural Potential(the max a race can become under their natural abilties) and Learned Potential(the max they become under learning another energy style type) and then have to account for different types if they're compatible.

A Chakra Human limits will be different from a normal one, which would be different from a Z-fighter, etc. Same with a Sayain(though, personally from the show stand point I don't think Sayain have Ki limits. Natural ones, yes)

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